Some Days

Some days it just doesn't go
   Often when it rains or snows...

Storm clouds gather in the skies of my brain
   Releasing rivers of self-pity and pain
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Krutsinger Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 11:20 PM
What a beautiful way to show us what we all feel but few can express as well.
Wolf Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Gee, that's an A-1 compliment. Greatly appreciated, Caren! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:01 PM
A sweet poem reminding us in the best of ways that we are not alone. We all have off days. Well done, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Deeply appreciated, Line! :) gw
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