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i think we do agree, before we are born , to spend some time together, the ones that draw and startle some, but never stay no never, one, a flash in the pan, a labour of love, and then they're gone forever??? some? Don re: "Another Life" Debbie Duncan
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August 16, 2013 at 9:46 AM
I read Debbie's poem yesterday... enjoyed the way you agreed... always~ Linda
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August 16, 2013 at 12:07 AM
I've always read that we decide before we come down here, who we will be hanging out with. I think I forgot to write , I'd rather be rich" ;}
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August 15, 2013 at 12:48 PM
A great reply to Debbie Duncans poem... But this could stand alone.
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August 15, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Hi Don-- different -- loved the analogy and the simple truth in this.
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August 15, 2013 at 3:03 AM
... well written, Don !!!! - Luck in contest ! - Have a nice day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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