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I'm thinking of all the times I've heard a beloved deceased person described as "Gone--but not

forgotten."

 

 

Solo

Alone in daylight
     at dusk
     at dawn
some are forgotten
   but not gone.    




posted October 11, 2016

January 9, 2019, entered in Brian Strand's January week 2 contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Oh Janice, this is so sad...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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October 12, 2016 at 11:12 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Janice - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! Janice
Smith Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:10 AM
So sad, so well done Janice. Congratulations...
Canerdy Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 1:01 PM
It IS sad, Charlie! Thanks so much for your comment. Janice
Nusker Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Thanks so much, Afzal! Janice
Krampe Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 5:21 PM
So beautiful, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 5:36 PM
Agnes, thank you so much! Janice
Smith Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 2:38 PM
Beautifully written one liner Janice...love the depth
Canerdy Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Thanks so much, Tim! Janice
Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 1:58 PM
All leave a footprint whether they realized it in life or not. Well said, Janice ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, CayCay! Janice
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