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Solitude In the Dell

High up on the top of the slope Living alone, in solitude, and hope. He was all alone in the deep wooded dell Yellow birds tinged with black flying so well A small brook winded its way between the trees Butterflies flew on hedges on the breeze. On the sunny side of the ramp The soil was perfectly damp, The brambles thrived with blue raspberries, Whilst here and there grew wild free born cranberries. Birds loved to pick the delicious fruit in season But flew away when other fruits gave them a reason. High up in his lonely shack, he cultivated food Tasty vegetables and poultry brood. No one ever came to visit him It suited him best, such was his whim.

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Date: 6/11/2022 12:05:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely place to live... to me... Well written. Excellent work. Ann
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Date: 6/5/2022 6:50:00 AM
Victor this is the way to live, within and around nature and wildlife, birds, bees and the friendly trees. Stupendous write. Hugs and blessings
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Date: 6/4/2022 3:07:00 PM
I really like this one of a man living such an existence in the lap of nature. Very nice writing, Victor.
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Date: 6/3/2022 1:38:00 PM
A lonely healthy existence. I wonder if he will have longevity. I enjoyed reading this one today. He should be healthy because he isn't being exposed to human ills, eats his own food, and has to exercise going up and down that hill. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/3/2022 3:06:00 AM
A happy recluse at one with nature..Delice
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Date: 6/3/2022 3:04:00 AM
A lonely soul, but happy in his solitary home. Lovely visions of the surroundings Victor… Belle
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Date: 6/2/2022 1:30:00 PM
lovely nature piece Victor, so full of expressive imagery and insightfulness. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/1/2022 5:32:00 PM
Living in solitude, but content as natural creatures come and go, beautifully crafted, Victor:) a very happy morning:)
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Date: 6/1/2022 2:52:00 PM
I want to live there…. A blessed place to be sure, Victor. I have not been here much of late. Low energy from pain. Due for big surgery in 6 days, getting my left shoulder replaced. Had to come read you. Joyous imagery here, boosting me. I thank you. Hoping you. Are ok, sending blessings and hugs…. sally
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Date: 6/1/2022 1:52:00 AM
Vibrant aloneness or despondent loneliness ~ which is he?
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Date: 5/31/2022 11:50:00 PM
It sounds like a place a peace to be with God. Solitude is ok for a while, but not all the time,,, for me. Enjoyed the imagery and the peacefulness of the verse. Blessings friend.
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:17:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Sad to have no visitors but if that is truly what he likes.
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Date: 5/31/2022 2:07:00 PM
He may live alone but he is surrounded by God's sweet creatures, they come and go but they do return , :)
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Date: 5/31/2022 1:13:00 PM
What a "Wonderful" write. Would you give the address out??? I would like to move. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 5/31/2022 10:28:00 AM
Some souls need solitude Victor. Your detailed poem depicts a man happy to live alone. Lovely imagery Victor. I enjoyed this. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/31/2022 10:09:00 AM
Ah the pastoral, quiet , peaceful life of the hermit. Sounds good to me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:44:00 AM
Victor, this is such a fine portrayal of peaceful living in the beauty and solitude of nature. Great writing!
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:39:00 AM
This was a fun read, great description and imagery. Nicely done.
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Date: 5/31/2022 5:43:00 AM
Your imagery makes the tale so real. Excellent write, as always, Victor.
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Date: 5/31/2022 5:22:00 AM
I am sure he felt blessed with his own solitary living in the well protected dell in the company of birds and enjoying wild berries. I feel like visiting his solitary shack to see him and the vegetation around. Very well penned, Victor
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Date: 5/31/2022 3:02:00 AM
Amen, and shalom in Peace of Christ. Victor, I agree totally with Tom ( u may have a great life up there!)
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Date: 5/31/2022 1:08:00 AM
With the doom and gloom in the world it sounds an ideal place to be Victor. Tom
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