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"SOLITUDE" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Solitude

She passed away and his world became a barren land of excruciating solitude!*







 © Demetrios Trifiatis
     23 February 2018

*Inspired by Victor Buhagiar's poem: " In Memoriam: Chiselled in My Heart "
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Mhangwa Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 1:00 PM
That's so sad my friend! Thank you for the beautiful tribute.
Godwin Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:28 PM
I don't lliike thhis topic sooo I'm saying you deelivered and i'm goneeee CayCa
Sathasivam Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Beautiful tribute and inspiration write. Very heart breaking write to our friend.
Y. Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Hi Victor, I agree with Silent, you have penned such a moving tribute and dedication to Victor:-) Alexis
Trifiatis Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Alexis , my dear friend, thank you for becoming my...Godmother! Haha! Should I forget Demetrios? Haha! Thank you for visiting and commenting!
Gupta Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 7:16 AM
A lovely line, Demetrios ... the flower might feel envious !...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:24 PM
So good to see you again my friend, Probir! Thank you! The flower knows I love it as much...!
One Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:40 AM
Beautiful tribute and inspiration, Victor is a great man and you are very kind to dedicate this to him..
Trifiatis Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thank you for not remaining silent my friend! God bless you!
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 5:39 AM
What a lovely and thoughtful tribute for our dear friend Victor. I told him on his beautiful tribute to his wife that I joined PS shortly after his beautiful wife passed away. Over the months I have seen him pen such loving and romantic poetic dedications. A wonderful love they shared. A fave with me dearest Demetrios ....Maria xxx
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February 23, 2018 at 12:22 PM
We all have supported our dearest friend, Victor during this horrible period and were surprised to see his poetry bloom! As he says : His wife seems to look after him! Thank you my friend for visiting and commenting! Hugs dear Maria xxx!
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February 23, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Very well said, Demetrios..a loved one's passing creates a vacuum and lasting pain.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:17 PM
True, my friend, Vijay! Thank you for your visit and comment!
Cunningham Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 2:46 AM
Demetrios. Before I scrolled down I thought of Victor when I read this. It must be one of the hardest things to cope with, pain eases with time but the void remains. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Yes, it must be but only those who pass through that understand the magnitude of grief! Thank you dear, Tom!
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February 23, 2018 at 2:46 AM
- Gone are all that's about common future, hopes and longings ... a big emotional loss - Heartbreaking write to our dear friend, Demetrios - Thanks - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Let us pray not to live something like that although we cannot avoid it unless we are lucky to die first! Thank you my dearest friend, Anne-Lise!Hugs xxx
Tor Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 1:30 AM
What an inspiration to have you write such a touching and painful reality in so few words Demetrios. I'm always taken aback by your wonderful intellect. God bless you my friend. I have been away and I have missed, my special friends.
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February 23, 2018 at 12:05 PM
So happy to see you after so long my friend, Michael ! Thank you for your lovely comment! Sorry that you had to comment for something so sad!
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