Solitude

So many stones have been thrown at me, 
That I'm not frightened of them anymore, 
And the pit has become a solid tower, 
Tall among tall towers. 
I thank the builders, 
May care and sadness pass them by. 
From here I'll see the sunrise earlier, 
Here the sun's last ray rejoices. 
And into the windows of my room 
The northern breezes often fly. 
And from my hand a dove eats grains of wheat... 
As for my unfinished page, 
The Muse's tawny hand, divinely calm 
And delicate, will finish it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
One Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:37 AM
You have a fine pen Lukas, this is not an acrostic though, I know it is confusing when you first join.. You could call this a free verse, most poems fit under that form on here...
Andrew Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Oh.. thanks much for helping me clear my doubts silent one.. :)
Anonim Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:43 AM
just soon i have finished reading your poem i felt lightness in me and thought what a delicate person you must be :)
Andrew Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:52 PM
Thankyou so much for your kind words...i am pleased that i could bring some peace to a sensitive reader like you mam.. means a lot for a learner. I hope i could make readers more happy by the little art i possess. :)
Michael Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:36 AM
That's beautiful solitude... I can do with a little bit of that...Lovely poem... All the best Lukas
Andrew Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Thankyou Arturo! Yes,you can surely help me out with my another one. I will be more than glad to learn n improvise. :)
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