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Solitude

So many stones have been thrown at me, That I'm not frightened of them anymore, And the pit has become a solid tower, Tall among tall towers. I thank the builders, May care and sadness pass them by. From here I'll see the sunrise earlier, Here the sun's last ray rejoices. And into the windows of my room The northern breezes often fly. And from my hand a dove eats grains of wheat... As for my unfinished page, The Muse's tawny hand, divinely calm And delicate, will finish it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/7/2018 7:37:00 AM
You have a fine pen Lukas, this is not an acrostic though, I know it is confusing when you first join.. You could call this a free verse, most poems fit under that form on here...
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Lukas Andrew
Date: 1/9/2018 7:34:00 PM
Oh.. thanks much for helping me clear my doubts silent one.. :)
Date: 1/2/2018 8:43:00 AM
just soon i have finished reading your poem i felt lightness in me and thought what a delicate person you must be :)
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Lukas Andrew
Date: 1/2/2018 3:52:00 PM
Thankyou so much for your kind words...i am pleased that i could bring some peace to a sensitive reader like you mam.. means a lot for a learner. I hope i could make readers more happy by the little art i possess. :)
Date: 1/2/2018 8:36:00 AM
That's beautiful solitude... I can do with a little bit of that...Lovely poem... All the best Lukas
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Lukas Andrew
Date: 1/2/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thankyou Arturo! Yes,you can surely help me out with my another one. I will be more than glad to learn n improvise. :)

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