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Love displayed..He is going to have to feed her and help feed the young for a few weeks ..She is making sure that she can trust him..Sara
Solid gray crocheted shawl veils sky. Fringes reach down cover distant hills, swift creek nearby. Dampness reigns, just seems to hover. Cool, but not cold wind softly blows. Red Cardinal high up supported only by tree bow. Great trust has in ancient back up.. Eerie stillness erupts 'pon air The silence before storm Then the rain begins, unawares of possible alarm. Just comes down without any cares. A plan, designed, a vow. Of its potential danger unawares Rain_ flooding storm allow?.. Rain without flooding the earth. God's promise from above Giving the first rainbow its birth In the quiet, feel God's love.... Finis!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/3/2012 1:21:00 AM
Great work Sara, beautiful lines flowing from your quill... I admire your work, love again dear... (plz enter this in a contest, if you haven't would love to see this placed high....)
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Date: 3/1/2012 2:54:00 PM
great work.....thought you had scrambled egg brains....not dense.....hehe
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:36:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Sara - I love the imagery
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Date: 3/1/2012 9:52:00 AM
soup mail Sara ..
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:18:00 PM
SARA, GREAT SPEED.... AND WONDERFUL FLIGHT... ENJOYING SO FAR..PD
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:15:00 PM
a vivid and vibrant portrait Sara of the lovely red cardinal and imagery of creek and hills.. the first line is tremendous.. good luck if for a contest luv..
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:06:00 PM
An enjoyable well written rhyme Sara thank you , Hugs and best wishes ,Declan xx
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:15:00 PM
Your description of the sky and damp haze is just like the weather we had here for the past couple days, Sara. Your poem has beautiful imagery and I love the last line's message. Let me know when the poem is finished, okay? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:46:00 AM
i have a few thoughts in my mind as your images linger around, sara.. a splendid start, an ending which i woudn't want to second guess.. looking froward to its fruition... lovely!..:) huggs!
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