Solid Flowing

In winters cold freeze,
water takes a solid rest.
Staying in one place.

Suns warmth brings life's flow.
Bringing forth cleansing pure springs.
Life continues on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 7:10 AM
Life goes on for sure..Good work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:38 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Jimmy
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:15 AM
I really like the way you describe the transition from a solid to a fluid, Jimmy. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, "Sis"
Sweetheart Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 7:34 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your HM in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water.. enjoy your special honor today with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 10:06 PM
oh, I liked this stop and go effect of winter and then spring.Clever one, JImmy!! congrats.
Roberts Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:00 AM
I love this one Jimmy, good luck in the contest
Wilson Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 3:32 AM
very lovely haiku Jimmy..descriptive and brightly optimistic..Take care~Deb
Haick Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 11:18 PM
Exceptional Haiku, JAM! Way to go! Love, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Nice metaphor of life and water, Good luck in the contest,
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