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Solid Flowing

In winters cold freeze, water takes a solid rest. Staying in one place. Suns warmth brings life's flow. Bringing forth cleansing pure springs. Life continues on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/3/2011 7:10:00 AM
Life goes on for sure..Good work..Sara
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Jimmy
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:15:00 AM
I really like the way you describe the transition from a solid to a fluid, Jimmy. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, "Sis"
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Date: 12/17/2010 7:34:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your HM in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water.. enjoy your special honor today with luv..
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Date: 12/16/2010 10:14:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR HM~Grate Write!!!!!God Bless ~Rick
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Date: 12/16/2010 10:06:00 PM
oh, I liked this stop and go effect of winter and then spring.Clever one, JImmy!! congrats.
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:00:00 AM
I love this one Jimmy, good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/15/2010 3:32:00 AM
very lovely haiku Jimmy..descriptive and brightly optimistic..Take care~Deb
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Date: 12/14/2010 11:18:00 PM
Exceptional Haiku, JAM! Way to go! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/14/2010 1:28:00 PM
Nice metaphor of life and water, Good luck in the contest,
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