Rainbow Promise Poet Cinquain

Solid Faith

holding
                                                  myself upright
                                             walking along narrow
                                        strips of solid redeeming faith
                                                        trusting


                                                       handed
                                                  over all things
                                            and waiting on the Lord
                                      may not see immediate changes 
                                                       praying


                                                      message:            
                                               don't come to see
                                             can claim occupancy
                                  showing how I cared for this piece
                                                      peaceful


                                                       no heir
                                                 in city or town?
                                            foolish to not have any
                                  here there and everywhere collecting
                                                      prayerful

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Old Buck December 2, 2016 at 2:14 PM Rainbow: I've just read your last 18 or so works. Each amazingly different. Spanning from intensity to humor. I don't have the understanding for much of what you do, I'm a simple rhymer, but enjoyed each one in spite of my shortcomings. :o) Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck Rainbow Promise December 5, 2016 at 12:16 AM Thanks Old Buck. Sometimes when I write, it depicts what is currently happening. Poets often use poetry to tell their story to those who care. Glad you enjoyed what I shared with you. I enjoy your rhymes too. God bless, Rainbow.