Solicitude

Today, feeling of solicitude touches me… I think of the situation of my daughter and her children. 10/16/23

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/22/2023 5:14:00 PM

Dear Marilene, your emotive monoku describes your chosen word "solicitude" with poetic finesse. A mother's concern is deeply felt for sure. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Marilene Evans
Date: 10/23/2023 12:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Yes, as mothers, we always want the best for our children and wish to take their pain away.

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement.

Marilene Evans
Date: 10/19/2023 5:57:00 PM

Thank you for my placement.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2023 10:19:00 AM

A deeply felt one liner here. Great job

Marilene Evans
Date: 10/18/2023 11:35:00 AM

Hello, Andrea! Thanks so much. This feeling of caring and being so deeply concerned with my daughter's current situation comes and goes. I hope she would be in a better situation soon.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2023 1:02:00 PM

Hi Marlene, You convey so much in your written one-liner. There's nothing like solitude to cause one to think about their loved ones. Best wishes in the contest. PS, It's so good to see you posting again;-) Alexis

Marilene Evans
Date: 10/16/2023 3:08:00 PM

Hello, hello Alexis! It's so wonderful to hear from you. Thanks so much for your comment, I appreciate it. Yes, it has been a while. Enjoy the rest of the day.