Solicitude

Today, feeling of solicitude touches me… I think of the situation of my daughter and her children.

10/16/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 5:14 PM
Dear Marilene, your emotive monoku describes your chosen word "solicitude" with poetic finesse. A mother's concern is deeply felt for sure. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Evans Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 12:03 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Yes, as mothers, we always want the best for our children and wish to take their pain away.
One Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your placement.
Evans Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Thank you for my placement.
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 10:19 AM
A deeply felt one liner here. Great job
Evans Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Hello, Andrea! Thanks so much. This feeling of caring and being so deeply concerned with my daughter's current situation comes and goes. I hope she would be in a better situation soon.
Y. Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Hi Marlene, You convey so much in your written one-liner. There's nothing like solitude to cause one to think about their loved ones. Best wishes in the contest. PS, It's so good to see you posting again;-) Alexis
Evans Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Hello, hello Alexis! It's so wonderful to hear from you. Thanks so much for your comment, I appreciate it. Yes, it has been a while. Enjoy the rest of the day.
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