Solemnly I

life has been fine
and my dream was to refine.
God damn it be like you
forever you not.
time has comes in no counts
with my wish to see what's over the edge,
to my surprise a lot said nay,
and I wonder why..
Solemnly I
promise to remain as I am,
in my dream of how soon I will begin to see mine,
time has fulfill twice
and to my surprise it's rising
for the mingle will not jingle...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Minardi Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 7:50 AM
this is cool, for the mingle will not jingle... I like your wordplay here :)
Chadi Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 2:10 AM
i pray for you not jingle with how you mingle.
Minardi Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 7:45 AM
this is cool, for the mingle will not jingle... I like your wordplay here :)
Minardi Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 7:42 AM
this is cool, for the mingle will not jingle... I like your wordplay here :)
J Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 4:43 AM
"promise to remain as I am" You fond the "pot of gold". There you go. Very nicely put. You have to love yourself first. Nice message and write.
Chadi Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:35 AM
thanks ernie i, i thought of something and it made me say what I wrote, nice encouragement from you, wish you glad tidings of bless.
Chadi Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:35 AM
thanks ernie i, i thought of something and it made me say what I wrote, nice encouragement from you, wish you glad tidings of bless.
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