Soldiers Nightmare Contest Waking Up From a Nightmare

VIETNAM VET SOLDIER'S NIGHTMARE

Another dream –
I could not wake –
Escape from what would follow--
Grasping for a secret word, the letters stark and hollow--
I was trapped entangled there,
Just beyond the reach
Of men that could release me
Or a hill that could be breached

Gunfire was a backdrop 
Soft and pungent was its sound
Fell on me like raindrops--strangely harmless on the ground

Smoky gray encased me like a piece of sleeping net
Tunnel faces hidden —easy killing, no regret-- 
Felt terror and the aching for the friends around me cold
Standup guys with stalwart hearts--just did what they were told

Then my cell phone beeped a beep---
A message had come in ....
Now awake I saw your name---
My new day would begin.


Victoria Anderson-Throop
November 25, 2012
waking from a nightmare contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 2:10 PM
RL is often more scary! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest Victoria. Love, Carol
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December 13, 2012 at 12:54 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Victoria xx
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December 12, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear Victoria! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 10:48 PM
Very well composed! Kept me captivated. Well done Victoria. Great write.
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