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Soldier Boy

Soldier boy, soldier boy You fell beneath the flag, With a picture of your mum and dad Hidden in your bag. Across the battlefield you went You felt so grown up then, But elation turned to horror As the bullets hit the men. Then it came for you It spun you like a top, The searing pain, confusion, You wished that it would stop. Soldier boy, soldier boy You fell beneath the flag. The light dimming in your eyes, As you fumbled in your bag. As you were carried in The stretcher bearers cried, That picture of your mum and dad, You held it, as you died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/10/2017 12:16:00 PM
This is very poignant and beautifully written.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/10/2017 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Dale :)
Date: 8/8/2017 2:00:00 PM
Wow. You wrote just right. The struggles and sacrifices of soldiers. Keep it up Gary. God bless you.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/8/2017 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Derek :)
Date: 8/5/2017 3:27:00 PM
This is so real and just heartbreaking. You have written this clearly for everyone to see. Thank you Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/5/2017 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)

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