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Solar Eclipse 2017

The countdown has begun Be sure and stay tuned To see, as our sun Parallels the moon A veil of crescent shadows Will stretch across my lawn A gentle wind's blow And quickly they'll be gone The sun, a pleasing strength The temp, rather magical Be sure not to blink The sight will be fantastical

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Date: 9/5/2017 12:47:00 PM
Dear Princess Hopper: I hop in your wonderful poem and hope we still rest in the tender hand of light. Enjoying your luminous lawn as the lesson of friendship from Little Prince waiting again the new date, beyond the clouds in high mood of another wonderful meeting. Excuse my crooked while admiring you from a waterlily of the blue lake imagining your blue eyes covering a world entire. Best regards and wishes.
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Date: 8/29/2017 1:37:00 PM
Fantastical poem Anna, nicely written Kind regards, Kevin
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Date: 8/23/2017 4:28:00 AM
I love this! I believe you will do awesome in the contest, I believe it's for a contest? This poem is so tremendous I just went through it with such ease, the flow was truly spellbinding! I really enjoyed reading your wondrous and stupendous poem this morning! What a fun piece, Great work my friend!!
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Date: 8/22/2017 1:05:00 PM
It was amazing... lovely tribute to the beauty of not only the eclipse but of the day
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