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Solar Eclipse 2017

The countdown has begun
Be sure and stay tuned
To see, as our sun
Parallels the moon

A veil of crescent shadows
Will stretch across my lawn
A gentle wind's blow
And quickly they'll be gone

The sun, a pleasing strength
The temp, rather magical
Be sure not to blink
The sight will be fantastical

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Ovidiu Bocsa

September 5, 2017 at 12:47 PM

Dear Princess Hopper: I hop in your wonderful poem and hope we still rest in the tender hand of light. Enjoying your luminous lawn as the lesson of friendship from Little Prince waiting again the new date, beyond the clouds in high mood of another wonderful meeting. Excuse my crooked while admiring you from a waterlily of the blue lake imagining your blue eyes covering a world entire. Best regards and wishes.

Kevin Shaw

August 29, 2017 at 1:37 PM

Fantastical poem Anna, nicely written Kind regards, Kevin

Russell Sivey

August 23, 2017 at 4:28 AM

I love this! I believe you will do awesome in the contest, I believe it's for a contest? This poem is so tremendous I just went through it with such ease, the flow was truly spellbinding! I really enjoyed reading your wondrous and stupendous poem this morning! What a fun piece, Great work my friend!!