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Solar Eclipse

stern King of days and sensuous Queen of nights of heavenly kingdoms mating in the sky - staring above is not wise - as they may get shy Won first place in Ku Duet Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/27/2020 5:13:00 AM

That is very funny ...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/27/2020 5:37:00 AM

lol.. Thank you..

Susan Woodrow

Date: 1/9/2020 12:29:00 AM

I doubt they will be getting shy being such exhibitionists... good one though :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/9/2020 12:37:00 AM

lol... Thank you Susan for your funny comment..

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/8/2020 7:16:00 PM

LOL charming, Jenish. Well done on your top win.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/8/2020 9:00:00 PM

Thank you Line..

Priyanka Chugh

Date: 1/8/2020 2:01:00 AM

Entirely Captivating.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/8/2020 3:32:00 AM

Thanks Priyanka..

Jc Hawkens

Date: 1/7/2020 5:37:00 PM

I love the creativity on this. There is a celestial symmetry to it. What a wonderful description of such a divine event. Congrats on your 1st place. JC

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/8/2020 3:32:00 AM

Thank you JC for your kind words..

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/6/2020 6:13:00 PM

Very creative metaphors of the solar eclipse, Jenish! Enjoyed this one! :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/6/2020 9:03:00 PM

Happy to hear that you like it..Thank you..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/5/2020 9:31:00 PM

CONGRATS on your first-place win, Jenish. Janice

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/5/2020 10:21:00 PM

Thank you Janice..

Paul Callus

Date: 1/5/2020 9:00:00 AM

Somewhat different from most of the other entries, Jenish, but definitely a worthy winner! Congratulations Regards // paul

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/5/2020 8:58:00 PM

Thank you Paul for your kind words..

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2020 9:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 10:39:00 PM

Thank you Eve.. Hugs..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/4/2020 9:25:00 PM

I'm glad to see you got first place on this gem! Congrats!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 10:39:00 PM

Thank you Juliet for that wonderful comment.. You inspired me...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2020 5:52:00 PM

I love allusions to moon as sun as lovers. I have written poems on that too. Congrats on the win with your creative take on the contest

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 10:37:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.. I love reading your poems and will surely search for that..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2020 1:21:00 PM

- A wonderful ku duet, Jenish :) - Congratulations on a 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Anne..

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/4/2020 11:31:00 AM

wonderfully penned... very creative thoughts...congrats on your top win :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 10:35:00 PM

Thank you Sandra...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/4/2020 11:09:00 AM

Congrats on you top win Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 10:35:00 PM

Thank you Vijay..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/4/2020 7:11:00 AM

Jenish, such interesting imagery! Congrats!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Kim..

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2020 7:06:00 AM

Absolutely fantastic imagery.. what a way to express it.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 7:15:00 AM

Thank you for placing me on top.. And for conducting such a beautiful contest...

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/30/2019 4:40:00 AM

... I would not blush though. Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 5:23:00 AM

Thank you Kai..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/29/2019 11:02:00 AM

Bullseye. This is just great! Where are all the commenters and comments?! A uniquely wonderful entry for the contest, methinks. Warm wishes, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/29/2019 11:12:00 PM

Thank you Gershon.. Happy New Year..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/29/2019 12:09:00 AM

Creative idea. Powerful imagery.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/29/2019 12:18:00 AM

Thank you Juliet..