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Solar Eclipse

stern King of days and sensuous Queen of nights of heavenly kingdoms
mating in the sky - staring above is not wise - as they may get shy






Won first place in Ku Duet Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One

Copyright © Jenish Somadas | Year Posted 2019

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Kai Michael Neumann Date: 1/27/2020 5:13:00 AM That is very funny ... Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/27/2020 5:37:00 AM lol.. Thank you..

Susan Woodrow Date: 1/9/2020 12:29:00 AM I doubt they will be getting shy being such exhibitionists... good one though :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/9/2020 12:37:00 AM lol... Thank you Susan for your funny comment..

Line Gauthier Date: 1/8/2020 7:16:00 PM LOL charming, Jenish. Well done on your top win. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/8/2020 9:00:00 PM Thank you Line..

Priyanka Chugh Date: 1/8/2020 2:01:00 AM Entirely Captivating. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/8/2020 3:32:00 AM Thanks Priyanka..

Jc Hawkens Date: 1/7/2020 5:37:00 PM I love the creativity on this. There is a celestial symmetry to it. What a wonderful description of such a divine event. Congrats on your 1st place. JC Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/8/2020 3:32:00 AM Thank you JC for your kind words..

Laura Leiser Date: 1/6/2020 6:13:00 PM Very creative metaphors of the solar eclipse, Jenish! Enjoyed this one! :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/6/2020 9:03:00 PM Happy to hear that you like it..Thank you..

Janice Canerdy Date: 1/5/2020 9:31:00 PM CONGRATS on your first-place win, Jenish. Janice Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/5/2020 10:21:00 PM Thank you Janice..

Paul Callus Date: 1/5/2020 9:00:00 AM Somewhat different from most of the other entries, Jenish, but definitely a worthy winner! Congratulations Regards // paul Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/5/2020 8:58:00 PM Thank you Paul for your kind words..

Eve Roper Date: 1/4/2020 9:52:00 PM Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/4/2020 10:39:00 PM Thank you Eve.. Hugs..

Juliet Ligon Date: 1/4/2020 9:25:00 PM I'm glad to see you got first place on this gem! Congrats! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/4/2020 10:39:00 PM Thank you Juliet for that wonderful comment.. You inspired me...

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/4/2020 5:52:00 PM I love allusions to moon as sun as lovers. I have written poems on that too. Congrats on the win with your creative take on the contest Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/4/2020 10:37:00 PM Thank you Andrea.. I love reading your poems and will surely search for that..

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/4/2020 1:21:00 PM - A wonderful ku duet, Jenish :) - Congratulations on a 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/4/2020 10:36:00 PM Thank you Anne..

Sandra Adams Date: 1/4/2020 11:31:00 AM wonderfully penned... very creative thoughts...congrats on your top win :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/4/2020 10:35:00 PM Thank you Sandra...

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/4/2020 11:09:00 AM Congrats on you top win Jenish. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/4/2020 10:35:00 PM Thank you Vijay..

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/4/2020 7:11:00 AM Jenish, such interesting imagery! Congrats! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/4/2020 7:16:00 AM Thank you Kim..

Silent One Date: 1/4/2020 7:06:00 AM Absolutely fantastic imagery.. what a way to express it.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/4/2020 7:15:00 AM Thank you for placing me on top.. And for conducting such a beautiful contest...

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/30/2019 4:40:00 AM ... I would not blush though. Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 12/30/2019 5:23:00 AM Thank you Kai..

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/29/2019 11:02:00 AM Bullseye. This is just great! Where are all the commenters and comments?! A uniquely wonderful entry for the contest, methinks. Warm wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 12/29/2019 11:12:00 PM Thank you Gershon.. Happy New Year..

Juliet Ligon Date: 12/29/2019 12:09:00 AM Creative idea. Powerful imagery. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 12/29/2019 12:18:00 AM Thank you Juliet..