Jenish Somadas Poet Haiku

Solar Eclipse

stern King of days and sensuous Queen of nights of heavenly kingdoms
mating in the sky - staring above is not wise - as they may get shy






Won first place in Ku Duet Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One

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Kai Michael Neumann January 27, 2020 at 5:13 AM That is very funny ... Jenish Somadas January 27, 2020 at 5:37 AM lol.. Thank you..

Susan Woodrow January 9, 2020 at 12:29 AM I doubt they will be getting shy being such exhibitionists... good one though :) Jenish Somadas January 9, 2020 at 12:37 AM lol... Thank you Susan for your funny comment..

Line Gauthier January 8, 2020 at 7:16 PM LOL charming, Jenish. Well done on your top win. Jenish Somadas January 8, 2020 at 9:00 PM Thank you Line..

Priyanka Chugh January 8, 2020 at 2:01 AM Entirely Captivating. Jenish Somadas January 8, 2020 at 3:32 AM Thanks Priyanka..

Jc Hawkens January 7, 2020 at 5:37 PM I love the creativity on this. There is a celestial symmetry to it. What a wonderful description of such a divine event. Congrats on your 1st place. JC Jenish Somadas January 8, 2020 at 3:32 AM Thank you JC for your kind words..

Laura Leiser January 6, 2020 at 6:13 PM Very creative metaphors of the solar eclipse, Jenish! Enjoyed this one! :) Jenish Somadas January 6, 2020 at 9:03 PM Happy to hear that you like it..Thank you..

Janice Canerdy January 5, 2020 at 9:31 PM CONGRATS on your first-place win, Jenish. Janice Jenish Somadas January 5, 2020 at 10:21 PM Thank you Janice..

Paul Callus January 5, 2020 at 9:00 AM Somewhat different from most of the other entries, Jenish, but definitely a worthy winner! Congratulations Regards // paul Jenish Somadas January 5, 2020 at 8:58 PM Thank you Paul for your kind words..

Eve Roper January 4, 2020 at 9:52 PM Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 10:39 PM Thank you Eve.. Hugs..

Juliet Ligon January 4, 2020 at 9:25 PM I'm glad to see you got first place on this gem! Congrats! Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 10:39 PM Thank you Juliet for that wonderful comment.. You inspired me...

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2020 at 5:52 PM I love allusions to moon as sun as lovers. I have written poems on that too. Congrats on the win with your creative take on the contest Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 10:37 PM Thank you Andrea.. I love reading your poems and will surely search for that..

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2020 at 1:21 PM - A wonderful ku duet, Jenish :) - Congratulations on a 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 10:36 PM Thank you Anne..

Sandra Adams January 4, 2020 at 11:31 AM wonderfully penned... very creative thoughts...congrats on your top win :) Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 10:35 PM Thank you Sandra...

Vijay Pandit January 4, 2020 at 11:09 AM Congrats on you top win Jenish. Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 10:35 PM Thank you Vijay..

Kim Rodrigues January 4, 2020 at 7:11 AM Jenish, such interesting imagery! Congrats! Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 7:16 AM Thank you Kim..

Silent One January 4, 2020 at 7:06 AM Absolutely fantastic imagery.. what a way to express it.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 7:15 AM Thank you for placing me on top.. And for conducting such a beautiful contest...

Kai Michael Neumann December 30, 2019 at 4:40 AM ... I would not blush though. Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai Jenish Somadas December 30, 2019 at 5:23 AM Thank you Kai..

Gershon Wolf December 29, 2019 at 11:02 AM Bullseye. This is just great! Where are all the commenters and comments?! A uniquely wonderful entry for the contest, methinks. Warm wishes, Gershon Jenish Somadas December 29, 2019 at 11:12 PM Thank you Gershon.. Happy New Year..

Juliet Ligon December 29, 2019 at 12:09 AM Creative idea. Powerful imagery. Jenish Somadas December 29, 2019 at 12:18 AM Thank you Juliet..