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03/26/25

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8 th place

Contest by Brian Strand

solely solar: truly toddler sun crawling on canvas of cosmos five billion years ago as protostar formed from stellar plasma of cosmic charisma. spinning sun with solar system revolving around center of milky way galaxy, fantastic but not fantasy. sun flare in glare, sunspots to spot in variance. sun corona, outermost arena to mesmerize. sunrise to sunset showering spectacular surprise. sun scattering rays cascading in opulence, supplying energy, initiating life on earth, to grow flora and fauna in diversity, carrying evolution on earth in beast and beauty, displaying hues and tunes in Nature on smart reality. on human conception, sun, a massive fiery whirling ball of burning hydrogen : another five billion years left to exhaust its fuel following the life cycle of an ordinary star tending to be a red giant ending in white dwarf obeying chandrasekhar limit: it’s limited credibility. yet ! startling fact to assimilate: sun with its solar system, a nano item holding a trivial position in universe, comparable to a tiny sand particle in sahara desert.. then ! where to find humans blessed by energy of sun? seems a fun.

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Date: 3/27/2025 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Very creative. Way to go. Sara K
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 3/27/2025 6:08:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and appreciation.Have Good Days.

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