Solace

women get that deathly grip, push ya over the madness pit, been there till brain burned with it, escaped into the black pit of solace.... only cost was half a wit. thanks Drake Don
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Breidenthal Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Ha! Nice one. Love the first and last line especially. Keep up the awesome poems! Always, Laura
Onclaud Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 11:12 PM
we are volatile but loving, don.. now let's see if you could handle child-bearing, lol... a crisp write from you with winning huggs!
Johnson Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
would have been female to try, during my many times here before the now...
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March 5, 2012 at 8:32 PM
Don, women can and will get that grip... nice way to get inspired.. always..pd
Sivey Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Ha ha, costing half a wit! You must have been using your other half with that clever line! And yes, women can sometimes have that effect over us! But I must say we can do a number on them sometimes too! I've been burned in the madness pit a few times myself, but it wasn't a bit of my wit that was taken...she took my tranquility and my swollen love! Well, I really enjoyed your poem this evening! Great Work!!
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