Solace

women get that deathly grip, push ya over the madness pit, been there till brain burned with it, escaped into the black pit of solace.... only cost was half a wit. thanks Drake Don

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/6/2012 3:47:00 PM

Ha! Nice one. Love the first and last line especially. Keep up the awesome poems! Always, Laura

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2012 11:12:00 PM

we are volatile but loving, don.. now let's see if you could handle child-bearing, lol... a crisp write from you with winning huggs!

Don Johnson
Date: 3/6/2012 12:00:00 AM

would have been female to try, during my many times here before the now...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2012 8:32:00 PM

Don, women can and will get that grip... nice way to get inspired.. always..pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/5/2012 4:36:00 PM

Ha ha, costing half a wit! You must have been using your other half with that clever line! And yes, women can sometimes have that effect over us! But I must say we can do a number on them sometimes too! I've been burned in the madness pit a few times myself, but it wasn't a bit of my wit that was taken...she took my tranquility and my swollen love! Well, I really enjoyed your poem this evening! Great Work!!