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Sojourner

A bridge to nowhere 
over streams of consciousness-
betwixt God and time


  Written: May 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Maverick Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 11:09 AM
This poses me with much to consider.?? Are There bridges of empathy.? Faith? Yearning? If so.? There must be those of anger and Despondancy.' The physical term highlit of Deeper interpretation to me Keith conciousness Streaming from one to another..And over terms maybe times? not Temporal, enlightenment glimpsed in quite the seminal.)
Trestrail Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 7:36 PM
Thanks Joe. I see you are a thinker. Cheers for the visit. Take care now.
Severo Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 12:57 AM
Is English your first language? Nice!
Trestrail Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Third after Esperanto and Clingon.
Leiser Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 7:51 PM
Wonderful senryu, Keith! Beautifully written! :)
Trestrail Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:42 PM
Thanks Laura. Always nice to see you.
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 8:17 AM
Me likey. Good 2 c u. ;o]
Parker Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 11:35 AM
It should end so well!
Trestrail Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Got locked up by some people who wanted rid of me so started digging. I feel like the Count of Monte Cristo. Cheers.
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