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I saw a scene similar and was touched by the beauty...Sara

Soft Yellow Cloud Floats

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                                            Soft yellow cloud floats
                                      Pale blue water placid scene...
                                           Pebble tossed ring grows

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Maverick Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 1:58 AM
So simply profond Sara..good to read:}
Brown Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Sara. Love, Carol
Babcock Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 2:01 PM
That is a beautiful picture and your Haiku describes the scene perfectly. love phyl
Pangelov Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 7:26 AM
Soft and beautiful - like autumn.
Horne Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Lovely visuals, Sara
Cooper Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 10:37 AM
another great pen sara!
Poesy Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Momentous form,intriguing overtone.Magnificent creation Sara.
Poet Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:24 PM
Can visualise it Sara..Beautiful haiku.Enjoyed.
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:16 PM
beautiful picture to go with your little gem!
Falotico Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Beautiful Poetry Sara.... stunning piece..luv Michael
Mckenzie Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Sara what a beautiful picture you wrote from I loved the last line very pretty! Laura :)
Sivey Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Wow, great poem! I envision the whole Haiku, what a beauty it is!!
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 4:46 PM
this is so breathtaking, sara.. winning wishes if for the contest; i feel the scene in my heart! :) huggs, nette
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