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I saw a scene similar and was touched by the beauty...Sara
. Soft yellow cloud floats Pale blue water placid scene... Pebble tossed ring grows *Note Click on "About This Poem"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/13/2011 1:58:00 AM
So simply profond Sara..good to read:}
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:42:00 AM
Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2011 2:01:00 PM
That is a beautiful picture and your Haiku describes the scene perfectly. love phyl
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Date: 9/4/2011 7:26:00 AM
Soft and beautiful - like autumn.
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:45:00 AM
Lovely visuals, Sara
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:37:00 AM
another great pen sara!
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Date: 9/3/2011 8:22:00 AM
Momentous form,intriguing overtone.Magnificent creation Sara.
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:24:00 PM
Can visualise it Sara..Beautiful haiku.Enjoyed.
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:16:00 PM
beautiful picture to go with your little gem!
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Date: 9/2/2011 6:00:00 PM
Beautiful Poetry Sara.... stunning piece..luv Michael
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Date: 9/2/2011 5:57:00 PM
Sara what a beautiful picture you wrote from I loved the last line very pretty! Laura :)
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Date: 9/2/2011 5:17:00 PM
Wow, great poem! I envision the whole Haiku, what a beauty it is!!
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Date: 9/2/2011 4:46:00 PM
this is so breathtaking, sara.. winning wishes if for the contest; i feel the scene in my heart! :) huggs, nette
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