- Soft Swan Wings -

You are a jeweled gift sparkling diamond rock temple 
One of thousand in the world touched petal by petal 

Skies above true blue wrapped cotton white emotions 
Arches over our earthly plains east to west one circle 

Inside silk ribbon feelings tie the knot perfectly 
With wings of a swan bound unto you eternally

In you who crowns the heart with passions ignite magic 
When the sky was falling into the promised land chants 

Carnation of a flower deeply stirring dewdrops rose 
In light of the rainbow mountains shone glitter dust

Loving you morning and night never goes out of fashion 
Amor helped to ignite flames that burn purely with love 










A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
07.09.2016
(unrhymed couplets)
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Cadet Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 11:57 PM
I dig this. I read this a few times, and I accidentally omitted the last couplet and transposed the "Carnation..." couplet with the "In you who..." couplet. It reads beautiful in more than one way. Thanks for sharing. W
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 2:39 PM
This is such a lovely collaboration from both of you! Congratulations on POTD! ; )
Roper Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Very nice from both of you congratulations on Poem of the Day to both
Callus Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 3:44 PM
I already had the pleasure of reading and commenting on Anne-Lise's page; once again well done to both of you, this time with added congrats for p.o.t.d. Regards // paul
Dalei Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Congrats for POTD. Enjoyed..............//:) hugs//Manmath.
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Hi Liam and Anne- Lise!:)) Wow! Congratulations to you both on POTD!A most very beautiful outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!You both deserve this great honor.I' m so very extremely happy for you.Well done!Just awesome!Enjoy your whole day!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
Bateman Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Liam and Anne-Lise, I told you guys that this one was a "Keeper"!! Way to go on receiving the POTD honor here. Of course, TR/FAV for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Turner Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 7:20 AM
Back to say Congratulations on POTD. I read this earlier on Anne-Lise's page. Another beautiful collaboration for the both of you:)
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September 11, 2016 at 5:26 AM
Congrats on your POTD!So beautiful..:) Sunita
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September 11, 2016 at 5:19 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS ...... HOORAY !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 5:56 AM
- A pleasure to share this poem with you, my friend Liam :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 6:42 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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