Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- Soft Swan Wings -

You are a jeweled gift sparkling diamond rock temple 
One of thousand in the world touched petal by petal 

Skies above true blue wrapped cotton white emotions 
Arches over our earthly plains east to west one circle 

Inside silk ribbon feelings tie the knot perfectly 
With wings of a swan bound unto you eternally

In you who crowns the heart with passions ignite magic 
When the sky was falling into the promised land chants 

Carnation of a flower deeply stirring dewdrops rose 
In light of the rainbow mountains shone glitter dust

Loving you morning and night never goes out of fashion 
Amor helped to ignite flames that burn purely with love 










A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
07.09.2016
(unrhymed couplets)
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Angeline Haikutwinkle January 25, 2017 at 10:52 AM Given a 7, compliments on the structure, coupled with enchanting imagery. I can see Liam's magical pen in this.

Phyllis Babcock September 23, 2016 at 4:53 PM A beautiful piece by both of you. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2016 at 6:39 AM - Phyllis, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - I'm happy that you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2016 at 9:05 PM beautiful as always , sweet lady with her writing companion. Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2016 at 2:41 AM - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus September 10, 2016 at 3:18 PM Another lovely collaboration, Anne-Lise & Liam! Swans and romance often tend to go hand in hand. Well done! Warm regards to one and hugs to the other:) // paul Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2016 at 5:12 AM - Pail, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - I'm happy that you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan September 9, 2016 at 10:10 PM Lovely couplet and a beautiful collaboration ... Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2016 at 6:00 AM - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta September 8, 2016 at 7:04 AM A nice romantic poem ... Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2016 at 7:26 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel September 8, 2016 at 1:23 AM Great collab once again, Anne-lise and Liam:) Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2016 at 1:30 AM - Jo, thanks for the comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner September 7, 2016 at 9:30 PM "Loving you never goes out of fashion" What a lovely line. A perfect ending to a most lovely write. You both write wonderfully together. It's always a pleasant read when you two collaborate Anne Lise and Liam:) Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2016 at 1:15 AM - Daniel, I'm happy that you enjoy it :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman September 7, 2016 at 4:03 PM Anne-Lise and Liam, This is indeed a very beautiful couplet. Congratulations on the smooth synergy of efforts in making this one a fabulous write. Most Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2016 at 1:12 AM - I'm happy that you enjoy it, Gary :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2016 at 3:15 PM A lovely way to do unrhymed couplets. with a fabulous partner!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2016 at 1:09 AM - Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 7, 2016 at 2:52 PM What a beautiful romantic poem Anne Lise and Liam such stunning imagery you write so wonderfully together HUGS Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2016 at 1:08 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter September 7, 2016 at 2:13 PM Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2016 at 2:24 PM - I'm happy that you enjoy it, Dorian :) - Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong September 7, 2016 at 2:12 PM Swans mate for life I believe and they exude romance. We have only black swans here in Hawaii, to my knowledge, and they are so beautiful. Just like this lovely collaboration! Fine writing between the two of you! 7 ; ) Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2016 at 2:22 PM - Love that lasts a lifetime, it's beautiful Connie - I've never seen black swans, only white :) - Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid September 7, 2016 at 1:47 PM thank you deeply anne lise for the pleasure of melting pens together wishing you a blessing of a day pal love how this all came together pal Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2016 at 2:19 PM - Always a pleasure, Liam - Thanks to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. September 7, 2016 at 1:28 PM Hi Anne-Lise, You and Liam have penned a beautiful collaboration . It is so romantic and I enjoyed it from start to finish. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2016 at 2:18 PM - Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)