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The Trilinea, one more haiku copycat from Berg‘s Pathways for a Poet, created by Nellie Amos the defining feature is the word “rose” must appear somewhere in the 3 lines.
The Trilinea is:

a tristich, a poem in 3 lines.
syllabic, with syllable count per line, 4/8/4.
rhymed, L1 and L3 rhyme.
composed to include the word “rose”.

Soft Silver

Moon doesn't  pose 
Covered by fog's soft silver shroud
Sun hasn't touched rose 



The Trilinea

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Jack Horne

January 15, 2017 at 9:36 AM

and another different form - I recall you mentioning this form, though. Lovely write

Sara Kendrick

January 15, 2017 at 9:55 AM

Thanks for dropping by..I think I asked you to try to write one..LOL..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2017 at 5:40 PM

Oh, now I see the definition of the form. It's sure interesting. I'd never have guessed all those rules!! This one has a softer touch than the other I saw.

Sara Kendrick

January 9, 2017 at 5:48 AM

Thanks for stopping by..Yes, all those rules..LOL..When one thinks that they have one written then there goes one of the rules being disobeyed..Sorta like life..Sara