Sara Kendrick Poet Tritina

Soft Edges Free Hedges

The fog slowly creeps its dampness covers everything
All of nature now fuzzy around its wet edges
Fog settles like damp blanket 'pon the hedges

Wind tossed pines' sighs float through the hedges
The Dove's sudden coo lifts spirits of everything
Still no red sun seen lifting gray from the edges

Humans are confused_still damp around edges 
They seek a life of gratifying hedges
Who don't want to work but desire everything

They want free everything_soft edges with all hedges

Inspired by Andrea Dietrich
Contest: Introducing Tritina ( a new poetry form for you!)
Written this 24th day of February 2013
Not an entry....

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Debbie Duncan March 2, 2013 at 12:35 PM great words you got up there Sara ;}

Demetrios Trifiatis February 25, 2013 at 6:36 AM Simply amazing!

Demetrios Trifiatis February 25, 2013 at 6:36 AM Simply amazing!

Donna Jones February 24, 2013 at 7:34 PM I really enjoyed this a lot .almost felt like you you singing

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2013 at 1:22 PM I read about this contest and this form. - (I think I must try it.) - I like your suggestion very much, Sara. - I wish you good luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey February 24, 2013 at 6:49 AM This is an outstanding and wonderful write my friend! I believe that this would be an awesome entry into the contest, I guess you want to create another one to place into the contest? You have written a delightful piece, one that I enjoyed immensely Sara! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!