Jeff Kyser Poet Rhyme

Soda Pop Shop

Hummingbird, daintily
darting so merrily, looking for soda pop,
without the

slightest of care!
To the next shop, sugary stop
down there!

That one?
Daringly drop!
Fun!

Hummingbird, daintily
to the next shop! Sugary stop
fun!

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Tenth Place Winner
For the “Let’s Minichu on fun” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani
Written on: 03/09/2022

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Christuraj Alex April 8, 2022 at 8:54 AM Very grand wring. Congratulations!

Paulette Calasibetta April 8, 2022 at 7:55 AM Jeff, congratulations on your win in the contest. I love the imagery of the hummingbird's "sugary stops". :)Paulette

Bj Legros Kelley March 9, 2022 at 10:46 PM Fun one Jeff :) I have two hummingbird feeders; they are such a delightful guest to have 'drop in' for a visit!

Gershon Wolf March 9, 2022 at 8:35 PM Oh, is this ever fun. A barrel of monkeys, Jeff! ~ Jealous, Big Bird