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Soda Pop Shop

Hummingbird, daintily darting so merrily, looking for soda pop, without the slightest of care! To the next shop, sugary stop down there! That one? Daringly drop! Fun! Hummingbird, daintily to the next shop! Sugary stop fun! —————
Tenth Place Winner For the “Let’s Minichu on fun” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani Written on: 03/09/2022

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Date: 4/8/2022 8:54:00 AM
Very grand wring. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/8/2022 7:55:00 AM
Jeff, congratulations on your win in the contest. I love the imagery of the hummingbird's "sugary stops". :)Paulette
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Date: 3/9/2022 10:46:00 PM
Fun one Jeff :) I have two hummingbird feeders; they are such a delightful guest to have 'drop in' for a visit!
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Date: 3/9/2022 8:35:00 PM
Oh, is this ever fun. A barrel of monkeys, Jeff! ~ Jealous, Big Bird
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