Soda Pop

Soda Cumulus clouds Biking, running, hiking Triathlon, walk, mountain, top Drinking, bathing, fishing Sunny, torridly Pop |________________________| Penned on November 11, 2014!
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Yvonne Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 1:17 PM
Belated Congratulations on your fine win. A really wonderful Diamante.
Walker  Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Thanks for the awesome congratulations Maurice. Verlena
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 8:35 PM
Very creative! Congrats on your great win, Verlena!! Hugs, Rhonda
Walker  Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 11:01 PM
Thanks Rhonda... Verlena
Kendrick Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Congrats on your winning work in the contest..I enjoyed reading it..Sara
Walker  Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 10:24 AM
Thanks for your congratulations Sara... Verlena
Onclaud Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:21 AM
energetic diamante that makes this a sure winner, verlena... my huge congrats!
Walker  Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Thanks Nette, Verlena.
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 12:35 AM
this one is quite unique and I see it was a winner. Congratulations!
Walker  Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Thanks Andrea for your awesome response. Verlena
Callus Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Well done...very original take! Lots of activity and burning of calories went into this! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Walker  Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Thanks Paul for the congratulations. Verlena
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your win Verlena
Walker  Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Brenda for the congratulations. Verlena
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:43 AM
- A really wonderful diamond, Verlena !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Walker  Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Thanks Anne Lise for congratulating me on my win. You are awesome... Verlena
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 3:46 PM
many congrats Verlena:-) hugs jan xx
Walker  Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 3:51 PM
Thanks Jan for the congratulations... Verlena
Bordner Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 8:18 PM
When I get crunk on intense exertion outdoors commuting my mind pops into a new dimension of the creative process Verlena. I like it when you riddle me. J.A.B.
Walker  Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Thanks for being creative Justin... You like energy boosters... Sending you a smile... Verlena
Andresen Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:27 AM
- A great diamante, Verlena !! - Good luck in the contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Walker  Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Thanks Anne Lise for your awesome response. Verlena
Bateman Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Verlena, I really like the imagery here in your Diamante write. What a perfect theme. Best of Luck in the contest!! Cheers, Gary
Walker  Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 4:27 PM
Thanks Gary for your awesome response... Verlena
Helppi Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Tsshhh, glug, glug. Your poem made me thirsty!
Walker  Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Thanks Dan for your commentary.... Verlena
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 10:38 AM
love the shape poem Verlena:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Walker  Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:00 AM
thanks Jan... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Grab me an Orange Crush! I enjoyed your poem Verlena.
Walker  Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Thanks Rick... Verlena
Gifford Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Yes, I liked your sequence, too. After all that activity, you need a soda pop!
Walker  Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Darlene... Verlena
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Great shape and sounds fun Verlena. Good luck in the contest.
Walker  Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Brenda... Verlena
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