Soda Cola

Acidic Soda 
Rust, Dirt, Grime.. be there no more
Cola breaks you down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:32 AM
- A very good haiku poem, James ! - // Anne-Lise :)
Nunez Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Ouch! Obviously, we subject our lives with things that eventually break us down, if unchecked. Great ku! :D Kim
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