Socks 2 - Mismatched

Socks 2

Sucked into the vacuum
Outside the realm of bliss
Closeted in claustrobic tears
Knit stitch dropped, ladder falls
Solitary socks seek new pairing

3/26/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Anderson Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Delightful use of language: especially 'Closeted in claustrobic tears' 'Knit stitch dropped, ladder falls'
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Thanks, John! Hugs...Kim
Trifiatis Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:37 AM
What an imagination!! Still smiling dear, Kim! Happy Easter my friend!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, Demetrios! Happy Easter!!
Talbot Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 3:22 AM
Brought a smile to my face, thank you Kim... Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Thanks, Mick!
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 3:26 PM
A fun poem, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Thanks, Line!
One Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 1:22 PM
wow, now that is a different and creative way to describe divorce... great mind Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Thanks so much, Silent!
Cunningham Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Haha, got a few odd socks here. Will email them to you lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 1:23 PM
LOL! I don’t need anymore mismatches.
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