Social Cues that are Weird Not the Norm

The daddy was lying on the couch again
Spending all of his hours after work doing nothing
Wifey dear was cleaning, cooking, and doing laundry
What she always does after an eight-hour day of office stuff

The daughter saw, and realized women must be the worker bees
Men get to lie around and do nothing; she felt angry and resentful
Their son saw too, but he did not pick up the socially- weird cues
He began to help his mother – doing laundry, and cooking supper

Daddy never noticed that his wife or son were doing anything
He was zoned in on a TV screen, watching one pattern after another
Not really seeing any of it, just trying to keep out of their way
The daughter resolved never to get married, thanks to this revelation.

She never did, and she never cleaned either.
Her house was a kind of a hoarder’s house,
Daddy refused to come visit, but her mother and brother did.
They usually brought cleaning supplies, which made her laugh.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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HAYNES Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 11:51 PM
Now I don't feel as bad about the mess in the kitchen. I enjoyed this one a lot
Krutsinger Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 2:44 AM
thank you my kindred friend
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