Sobriety: My Long Lost Friend

She used to be my only friend	
Every day she would mend.

Mend my soul back together	
Ever helping me fair the weather.

Weather I was sick or well	
She would help me through my hell.

Hell and back through this life		 
Repairing me after the strife.

Strife that lingered at my door		
Always wanting, wanting more.

More of me she would take	 
More and more every day.

Days went by, passed in weeks	 
I would wander, her I’d seek.

Seek the comfort she would send
Until her flow came to an end.

I thought that alcohol was my only friend
Until I sought an alternate end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 5, 2016 at 10:18 PM
monique brandt, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ---LINDA
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December 9, 2012 at 5:49 PM
Monique, I can relate with this one. I spent years befriending and loving alcohol. Like you stated, I myself found an alternate route. Great job!!!
Clark Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 2:43 PM
I like your take on this. Very clever
Tsiluma Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Clever take on a poignant subject! Nice write Monique!
Brandt Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 5:44 PM
Thanks, Vicky! *Monique
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October 14, 2012 at 5:31 AM
A poem that is really good written,Monique - Good flow and good rhymes. Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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