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So You Think You Know Me

So you think you know me 24/04/2018 So you think you know me By the smile that I project. My happy face is what you see, So my thoughts I can protect. This book is shrouded deep Down in depths out of reach. Encrusted with coral, in a heap Of memories left by the sun to bleach Like currents on the ocean floor Eroding slowly at my defences. The smile cracks, the minds plankton pour Over the lips, breaking through the trenches. So you think you know me By my crooked smile. Swim with my minds tempest sea With patience, for it may take a while.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/26/2018 11:57:00 PM
Thoughtful poem, Jeff! I loved it!
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 4/30/2018 8:00:00 PM
I’m so glad you enjoyed my poem Ambica
Date: 4/25/2018 4:33:00 PM
Lovely winning work. Way to go..Congrats on your placement in the contest.Sara
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 4/25/2018 8:03:00 PM
Tx Sara
Date: 4/24/2018 7:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! A compelling poem.
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 4/25/2018 7:56:00 PM
Tx Susan, I enjoyed this one.
Date: 4/24/2018 7:02:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Jeff.
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 4/25/2018 7:56:00 PM
Cheers mate
Date: 4/24/2018 11:25:00 AM
Hey Jeff. This is a nice write. Congratulations on your win.
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 4/25/2018 8:04:00 PM
Hey mate, glad you enjoyed it. Cheers buddy

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