David Smith Poet Political Verse

So You Think Gangs Are Cool

So, you think gangs are cool,
Are you really that big a fool,
Did I not see you at a rally to make women your equal?
And did you not support a carpool,
To keep children safe from a possible ghoul.

What makes you think gangs will let any woman think they are equal,
Did you not hear about shots being fired at a car that was taking kids, 
  to school?
Might not a gang member have the potential to become a ghoul,
Now do you still think gangs are cool,
Or are you an even bigger fool.

So, what can you do to show you are no fool,
Without being shot by a ghoul,
If you have kids in school,
Tell them you think gangs are no longer cool,
When they bring drugs to school,
Which if imported could be funding terrorists,
  Who are even less cool,
I am sure, there is even more you can do,
   If you want women to be your equal,
Your children to be safe at school,
And you have not yet sold your soul.

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Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2021 at 6:14 AM It took a while to find but it was worth the search. Definitely not cool. Kids should be safe at school. A thought provoking write. Peace brother. David Smith October 17, 2021 at 12:54 PM Glad you found it Richard. I am trying to get poem widely circulated. I read it out at a recent meeting held by our local MP re gang problems locally. finding it hard to get newspapers to print it. Last week spoke to Mayor of Timaru in NZ and he has taken a copy, one of worst gangs has just set up there. peace to you too. David in NZ

Lindsay Laurie February 22, 2020 at 5:03 PM G'day David … certainly not cool at all, but perhaps it's to sense of belonging if feeling society has rejected them, but becoming a member can be fraught with danger - thank you David - Lindsay David Smith February 22, 2020 at 8:20 PM I think at first people think they can intimidate with impunity but by time they realise not case they are in too deep. Should never let gangs be socially acceptable. Also I have no doubt imported drugs fund terrorism. Children should not have to live inside a gang. Hope where you live you can walk down street without fear. Regards David

Jennifer Proxenos February 10, 2020 at 9:50 AM An important and essential message you have penned with your quill David - This should be spread in the media around the world - blessings my friend. Jennifer. David Smith February 10, 2020 at 10:31 PM I am game if you know someone in media over there, as long as my name goes on it. There are so many David Smith's in NZ, so should be no repercussions for me, so if you feel safe go for it. Very best regards David

Swetha Vangaveti February 4, 2020 at 5:46 AM A profound and deep write!! Just straight and to the point!!! David Smith February 5, 2020 at 3:37 PM Thank you for taking time to read. May you and your family keep safe your poetry continue to inspire and bring hope and positive dialogue. Regards David.

Muhammad Imtiaz February 4, 2020 at 12:33 AM Hi David nice piece of writing with strong lesson for peace. Thanks for your writint. it is really heart-touching David Smith February 4, 2020 at 4:13 AM Thanks for feedback. I find it hard that people can say they want best for children and then condemn them to live in gangs. The same about equality for women. They are setting up a chapter of America's most dangerous gang here in Christchurch NZ. I weep for those they will destroy and pray I can forgive the politicians who are wringing their hands. My soul rejoices that we still have poetry and the hope it gives. Regards David in NZ