So You Say...

Had I not looked into your eyes
Seen that darkness brewing there
Had I not held your hand and felt the amber turning cold
Had I not heard your wisper carried in the wind of night
Of feelings disheveled
I would have believed you when you said 

Had the sun not set and I in dreamful slumber resided
Had I not placed a hand on this solid heart of yours
Had I not called your name entertwined in mine
And felt your distancing emotions
I would have believed you when you said

Had I not felt your emptiness when you held me
Had I not heard secret whispers in secret rooms
Had I not seen your uncaring stare when I bruised by your thoughtless words
And witnessed the emptiness of your apology
I would have believed you when you said...

Today I love you, tomorrow I will love you and forever our love remains
Today I cherish you,tomorrow brings a smile to my face because I will always see you
And forever our future will remain
Today nothing compares to you,tomorrow the sun will shine upon me for I have you in my 
life
And forever you will remain in my heart
Today I need you,tomorrow I will always need you
And forever I will be whole with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/29/2009 6:08:00 AM
Interesting way to put the topic here. Keep writing. Sara
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