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So Weak

Peeking at myself from a narrow gap I felt as if looking at my bill after a long nap If I don’t pay my debt because of indulgence My card will surely be cancelled Sometimes reality is crueler than a murderer Definitely, the reality is crueler than a debt collector But, you accept me as I am Including my weakness I know you are also weak We weakers will be fated with weaker ends However, we are having nicer weekends Sometimes reality is crueler than a murderer Definitely, the reality is crueler than a debt collector But, you accept me as I am Including my poverty I know you are also poor We poorers will be happy with small things That is why, we are singing many love songs

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Date: 3/5/2017 9:24:00 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 3/5/2017 4:47:00 PM
Thank you for your warm and kind comment.
Date: 3/1/2017 4:49:00 PM
Nice job!
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 3/1/2017 4:56:00 PM
thank you.
Date: 3/1/2017 3:26:00 PM
A touching poem.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 3/1/2017 4:55:00 PM
Thank you, Osamu.

Book: Shattered Sighs