Home » Poems » Wayne Emerson Tidwell » So Tired

So Tired

I'm tired of things Beyond my control I'm tired of Brain scattered lies I'm tired of pain And chaotic soul I'm tired of Sordid disguise I'm tired of pebbles Invading my pond I'm tired of Seeking to flee I'm tired so tired Exausted beyond I'm tired somewhere Inside me.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Nita Martin

Date: 11/3/2008 7:19:00 PM

very good I know how you feel I think everyone has been where you are at one time I love the way you show how you feel your friend Nita

Z G

Date: 8/7/2008 8:09:00 AM

Everything that you have mention is very true, very well written.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/6/2008 5:02:00 AM

BOY, do I know what you mean...life is hard, very very trying, hard and mentally, physically and spiritually exhausting - but that is the test! Stay strong and have faith, you are within a star, shine your light! Love Kristin P.S-well written!

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/5/2008 9:19:00 PM

Wayne - So much emotion in this poem the pain just leaps off the paper - I know at times it's hard but Stay Strong Inside - God Bless