So Tired

I'm tired of things
  Beyond my control
    I'm tired of
      Brain scattered lies
        I'm tired of pain
          And chaotic soul
            I'm tired of 
              Sordid disguise
              I'm tired of pebbles
            Invading my pond
          I'm tired of
        Seeking to flee
      I'm tired so tired
    Exausted beyond
  I'm tired somewhere 
Inside me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Martin Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 7:19 PM
very good I know how you feel I think everyone has been where you are at one time I love the way you show how you feel your friend Nita
G Avatar
August 7, 2008 at 8:09 AM
Everything that you have mention is very true, very well written.
Reynolds Avatar
August 6, 2008 at 5:02 AM
BOY, do I know what you mean...life is hard, very very trying, hard and mentally, physically and spiritually exhausting - but that is the test! Stay strong and have faith, you are within a star, shine your light! Love Kristin P.S-well written!
Jordan Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 9:19 PM
Wayne - So much emotion in this poem the pain just leaps off the paper - I know at times it's hard but Stay Strong Inside - God Bless
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