So She Waits

Eleanor Rigby was her name
Daughter of a coal mining man
Oh, he loved that freckle faced girl
She was where his whole world began

Her mother was long dead and gone
A victim of this brutal life
Her dad would say,"Soldier on, girl -
One day you'll be a miner's wife!"

That thought alone drove her to tears
She'd marry well or not at all 
She formed a dream of silk and lace
And thought of the debutante's ball

And then one day the mine caved in
All were lost in that darkest pit
Her dream was all that she had left
She worked at what was let of it

Years passed as she bided her time
The debutantes stood in their lines
She waits at the window to see
That man who knows nothing of mines.


9-5-19
Contest: Eleanor Rigby, Who Was She
Sponsor: Jerry T Curtis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 10:09 AM
This is lovely. So so beautiful.
Bradfield Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 11:00 PM
Thank you!
Bangalee Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 10:51 PM
so she waits for the love........./// beautiful poem penned
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September 5, 2019 at 10:55 PM
Thank you!
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