So Sad

Her face was slashed with a knife.
She was evicted from her life!
The gashes filled with blood, 
he thought he was such a stud!

The constant bashing on her brain,
made him go even more insane!
What did she do wrong?
Except for singing a song
that he didn’t like at all!
So, she had to take a fall!

When the police came round to call,
he knew nothing at all!
Said when he came home,
she was already in a zone.

So innocent all of a sudden,
but something he has forgotten.
What about the doubt,
maybe someone heard a shout!

What will he do?
Go & kill them too,
or will he start to run,
& in the end,
just kill himself with a gun!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 7:31 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
A  Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:35 PM
such a sad write........SKAT
Bright Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Welcome to PoetrtySoup this is an excellent scribe I especially like your flow of words.
Joubert Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 5:16 AM
Thanks Carol, i appreciate it! have a great day!
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 5:08 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you JP. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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