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So Sad

Her face was slashed with a knife. She was evicted from her life! The gashes filled with blood, he thought he was such a stud! The constant bashing on her brain, made him go even more insane! What did she do wrong? Except for singing a song that he didn’t like at all! So, she had to take a fall! When the police came round to call, he knew nothing at all! Said when he came home, she was already in a zone. So innocent all of a sudden, but something he has forgotten. What about the doubt, maybe someone heard a shout! What will he do? Go & kill them too, or will he start to run, & in the end, just kill himself with a gun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/20/2016 9:35:00 PM
such a sad write........SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2013 5:34:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrtySoup this is an excellent scribe I especially like your flow of words.
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:16:00 AM
Thanks Carol, i appreciate it! have a great day!
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:08:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you JP. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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