Destiny Budd Poet Rhyme

So Raw

So rotten, so raw
Just ready to fall
A beat's keeping this corpse alive

So silent, so still
Somewhat at will
Just waiting for time to pass by

So coarse, so cold
Feelings so old
Things just don't seem to be right

So blank, so bland
Just don't understand
Why I'm stuck in this life


January 2010

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Anthony Beesley February 6, 2011 at 1:30 PM Been there...read my poem "time and a season"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2010 at 2:21 PM Congrats on your featured poem this week on Soup.. wonderful choice to feature and share..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of PS

Carol Sunshine Brown March 29, 2010 at 5:15 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Destiny. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Careon Ferryman March 16, 2010 at 3:10 PM Despair is the killer of happiness....So don't

Faleshia Murphy March 12, 2010 at 9:46 AM VERY NICE WRITE AND WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP THING WILL GET BETTER GOOD LUCK FALESHIA

Skat A March 11, 2010 at 9:02 PM A heart beat I read with your poem. I do love a poem with with the question u ask at the end...Why??? I'm stuck in life.. I my self can relate.....ENJOYED

Patrick Wakefield March 11, 2010 at 5:36 PM well well well well then. me like.