So Raw

So rotten, so raw Just ready to fall A beat's keeping this corpse alive So silent, so still Somewhat at will Just waiting for time to pass by So coarse, so cold Feelings so old Things just don't seem to be right So blank, so bland Just don't understand Why I'm stuck in this life January 2010

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Anthony Beesley

Date: 2/6/2011 1:30:00 PM

Been there...read my poem "time and a season"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2010 2:21:00 PM

Congrats on your featured poem this week on Soup.. wonderful choice to feature and share..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of PS

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2010 5:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Destiny. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Careon Ferryman

Date: 3/16/2010 3:10:00 PM

Despair is the killer of happiness....So don't

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/12/2010 9:46:00 AM

VERY NICE WRITE AND WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP THING WILL GET BETTER GOOD LUCK FALESHIA

Skat A

Date: 3/11/2010 9:02:00 PM

A heart beat I read with your poem. I do love a poem with with the question u ask at the end...Why??? I'm stuck in life.. I my self can relate.....ENJOYED

Patrick Wakefield

Date: 3/11/2010 5:36:00 PM

well well well well then. me like.