Brian Davey Poet Couplet

So Quiet

Spinning in the solitude, rounding the cosmic wheel
   Stuck within the gratitude, the favors from those to kill
     Shifting from the latitude, in search of a brand new place
       Sliding down the magnitude, body trembling from its embrace

         Ranting in a somber mood, incoherent thoughts the mind can hear
           Raining naked, wet, and glistening nude, barely controlling the fear
             Raging in negative attitude, unable to focus blurred into now unclear
               Resting in the solitude, death is so... so... quiet within your ear...


				        bmdavey@08/29/20

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Silent One August 29, 2020 at 4:19 AM Hey Brian, hope you are ok... This is a deep and sad poem... I hope it is not about death... Brian Davey August 29, 2020 at 11:50 AM It is what we make it is it not? Thank you for the comment my friend I hope you are doing well!