Caren Krutsinger Poet Rhyme

So Much Help Day One Day Two

So much help day one day two
Impressed us all this man named Shoe
Three and four was there at the bell
Helping out and rather well.

Where is Shoe? I asked week two.
Laughter came from one, now two.
Let me guess, one did shout.
On week one he came right out.

You will never see that again.
He shirks his duty like a second skin.
He will probably forever now be in.
Tries to impress first week, my kin.

Well yes he had impressed me.
Lots of help he’d kindly be.
I guess this is only on week one.
Other weeks he hid when work was to be done.

So much help day one day two
Impressed me for sure this man named Shoe
The others had his waterloo
For they had worked longer with Mr. Shoe

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Wren Rushing August 23, 2019 at 3:48 PM I guess Mr. Shoe puts his best foot forward, then takes a step back. Great write Caren! Caren Krutsinger August 24, 2019 at 6:30 AM I love your comment, and you are surely stepping on the truth.

James Edward Lee Sr. August 23, 2019 at 1:41 PM I get day one, I've acknowledge day two but alas where's the "foot" is it on or with day three?? CUTE James Caren Krutsinger August 24, 2019 at 6:30 AM It is all over the place kicking with pure madness James. Thanks for stopping by.

Panagiota Romios August 23, 2019 at 12:13 PM Caren, you are an unusual poet, indeed. I could never think so brightly. Thank you. Panagiota Caren Krutsinger August 24, 2019 at 6:31 AM Yes you can, and you do! I have seen it over and over!