Gershon Wolf Poet Couplet

So Many Thoughts

So many thoughts run through his head
  Branches of rivers seeking a thread

Loose ends never gathered; perforce flung
  Far from a disheartened, silent tongue



                  July 07, 2020
  Strand Completely New (7) Poetry Contest
              Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Aditi Mishra July 14, 2020 at 2:22 PM "branches of rivers seeking a thread"...those lines immediately brought a familiar feeling of getting carried away with my thoughts Gershon. What an honest portrayal! Congratulations on your win :)

Sam Kauffman July 13, 2020 at 10:08 PM Wonderful metaphoric writing, Gershon. - "seeking a thread," "loose ends never gathered." Your theme is so vididly highlighted in your words. - No lack of focus or disorientation here! Congratulations.

John Watt July 10, 2020 at 11:40 PM I'm sure many can relate; I sure can. Well wrought, wordsmith. Congrats ~ John Gershon Wolf July 11, 2020 at 10:36 PM Very, very kind comments from your heart of gold, John. Really appreciated. Joy and Light, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger July 10, 2020 at 4:00 PM Wonderfully poetic and prophetic. Gershon Wolf July 11, 2020 at 10:35 PM 'Prophetic,' you say?!… Show me the profit instead! lol. Thanks, Caren

Edward Ibeh July 10, 2020 at 4:22 AM Beautifully rendered, Gershon:) Congratulations! Gershon Wolf July 11, 2020 at 10:29 PM Thank you so much for noticing my HM in Brian's contest. Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas July 8, 2020 at 12:44 AM Wow.. Short, but full with splendid poetic expressions.. Your muse is in top notch..Have a great day.. Gershon Wolf July 8, 2020 at 7:12 PM Thanks for the spirited comment, Jenish! I was hoping people would enjoy this one. So far, you, and you alone, have kept my (misplaced) hope alive. Thank YOU! :) gw