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So Many Thoughts

So many thoughts run through his head Branches of rivers seeking a thread Loose ends never gathered; perforce flung Far from a disheartened, silent tongue July 07, 2020 Strand Completely New (7) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/14/2020 2:22:00 PM

"branches of rivers seeking a thread"...those lines immediately brought a familiar feeling of getting carried away with my thoughts Gershon. What an honest portrayal! Congratulations on your win :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/13/2020 10:08:00 PM

Wonderful metaphoric writing, Gershon. - "seeking a thread," "loose ends never gathered." Your theme is so vididly highlighted in your words. - No lack of focus or disorientation here! Congratulations.

John Watt

Date: 7/10/2020 11:40:00 PM

I'm sure many can relate; I sure can. Well wrought, wordsmith. Congrats ~ John

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2020 10:36:00 PM

Very, very kind comments from your heart of gold, John. Really appreciated. Joy and Light, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2020 4:00:00 PM

Wonderfully poetic and prophetic.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2020 10:35:00 PM

'Prophetic,' you say?!… Show me the profit instead! lol. Thanks, Caren

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/10/2020 4:22:00 AM

Beautifully rendered, Gershon:) Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2020 10:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for noticing my HM in Brian's contest. Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/8/2020 12:44:00 AM

Wow.. Short, but full with splendid poetic expressions.. Your muse is in top notch..Have a great day..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2020 7:12:00 PM

Thanks for the spirited comment, Jenish! I was hoping people would enjoy this one. So far, you, and you alone, have kept my (misplaced) hope alive. Thank YOU! :) gw