So Low

Falling away,
Fading fast,
My heartbeat fainter and fainter,
My confidence lesser and lesser,
I’m now even afraid,
To do the things that I could do,
To live the life that I’m supposed to,
I just can’t understand,
Why I’m so low,
Feeling so alone,
Like I don’t belong anywhere,
Feeling Like I should not exist at all.

Falling fast,
Fading away,
My heartbeat lesser and lesser,
My confidence fainter and fainter,
I’m now even afraid,
To do the things I’m supposed to,
To live the life that I could,
I just can’t understand,
Why I’m alone,
Feeling so low,
Like I don’t exist,
Feeling Like I should not belong anywhere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ongawo Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 5:44 AM
a helpless feeling you have there, David hope its just for the arts and not real. nice work- lucas-
A   Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 12:05 PM
sadness in this take care always p.d.
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