Phyllis Babcock Poet Rhyme

So Long To Winter

You drop  slowly to the ground
Silently, not making a sound
You gather layer upon layer of dust
Playing with you is a must.

You get colder the more I watch
You melt at my very touch
Coming to see me in winter season
Without any rhyme or reason.

I can only play with you so long
Until your season is done
I must wait for a season new
then bid you winter adieu.

11/10/12

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Debbie Duncan February 14, 2013 at 9:30 PM very well done indeed Phyllis,,,, I wish you a Happy Valentine's Day ;}

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2013 at 9:07 PM Phyllis , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 9, 2012 at 7:19 AM Brrr, makes me cold Phyl, but I know it's written with a warm heart and that warms me xx

Elizabeth Wesley November 16, 2012 at 9:40 AM Ah Phyl, how I wish it were true, despite the hope you express, it hangs in front of me like an enduring chill. Now write me one to get me through it! :) Luv, Lizzie

Michael J. Falotico November 12, 2012 at 10:48 AM EXCELLENT POETRY!!! So well written and formed. Wow. My fav of the day!! Hugs n more Michael

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2012 at 4:37 PM this is really neat, Phyllis. playing with winter. Not me. hahaha. I really enjoyed this and thanks for your comments. Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A November 10, 2012 at 4:07 PM Hello Phyllis, I'm sure many praise your title... "so long to winter".... love the poem..PD

Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2012 at 12:31 PM A truly lovely poem Phyllis, I love it - Wishing you a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)