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So Long Ago [inspired By Logan Saucillo]

it hurts so bad, this pain making me so sad, my heart bruised, feeling just used, and you took so little care, your love you never shared, leaving me weak and broken on the ground, with hallow words to make me sleep sound, sound, did you hear that sound, my heart healing just a little now, reversing this pound, giving you back your terminal disease, no longer will i beg of you on my knees, ill be free of this terminal pain, because im letting go before i go insane, youll be bit and bring your demise, ill no longer listen to your pitiful lies, why would you do this to me, why would you bring to my knees, lying in my misery, face down, in my misery, i loved you, my feelings were true, i would have done anything for you, and you left me, left me for dead, gave up on me, what were the last words you said, that you loved me but you hated me so, that im worthless and i should go, broken, no, ill be no longer broken, choking on these tears, for you, ill leave them here, finally letting go, you say i wont, i say i told you so, im done with this abuse of my fragile little heart, im fighting back, i wont let you tear me apart, i wont waste another night of tears, waiting for you to pick me up from here, waiting for you to wipe away these tears, no, im letting go, like i know i should have done, so very long ago

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/13/2009 1:12:00 PM
glad to know i inspired you =) this poem is a great expression of emotion. i can feel it within my heart. we really do need to write together. that'd be so awesome.
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