So Long

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I'm nothing special, that's for sure, But if you find my motives so impure ... Perhaps it's best that we parted ways, And kept as gold, those fairer days.

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/27/2017 5:53:00 PM

...as "nothing gold can stay", lovely pen Greg :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2017 6:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen! <3

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2017 1:42:00 AM

such a poignant verse well scribe, greg.. spill ink!..huggs

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2017 2:26:00 AM

Thank you, Nette! It was actually a note I'd written to someone in reply on Facebook, but it made a nice little verse, so I posted it.