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So Long

I'm nothing special, that's for sure,
But if you find my motives so impure ...
Perhaps it's best that we parted ways,
And kept as gold, those fairer days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 5:53 PM
...as "nothing gold can stay", lovely pen Greg :)
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! <3
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:42 AM
such a poignant verse well scribe, greg.. spill ink!..huggs
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 2:26 AM
Thank you, Nette! It was actually a note I'd written to someone in reply on Facebook, but it made a nice little verse, so I posted it.
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