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So Long

Nothing last forever sometimes good things never start I would of cherished you like a treasure so why the sudden change of heart I wanted to bring you joy & pleasure but you just put me in the dark It seemed right being together how did we ever get split apart The feeling that i had were almost to strong to contain why'd you have to leave so fast i barley got to know your name I'll admit it makes me sad how you bounce & wont explain We could've had a blast baby girl its such a shame I would've showered you with gifts & treated you like a queen I loved it when we kissed layin next to you was like a dream I was gonna ice out your wrist & make your neck & fingers bling But i'm glad you chose to split before i put you on my team I know you didn't care cause you never showed appreciation We could've made the perfect pair but you just wanna keep me waitin Well soon i won't be there cause i'm starting to get impatient & it really isn't fair you should've already been mine for the takin So theres nothing left to do but keep my head up & move on & get over feeling bue but to continue to stay strong All i ever wanted was you but you just wanna do me wrong So heres my goodbye i'm through see ya later girl so long

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/6/2012 6:01:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Date: 5/25/2012 3:36:00 PM
It's nice to hear this from the other sex for a change. Well done on a lovely write!
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Date: 5/25/2012 3:23:00 PM
Very well written this poem, Brandon - like it alot. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/25/2012 5:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brandon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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