So Long

Nothing last forever
sometimes good things never start
I would of cherished you like a treasure
so why the sudden change of heart
I wanted to bring you joy & pleasure
but you just put me in the dark
It seemed right being together
how did we ever get split apart

The feeling that i had
were almost to strong to contain
why'd you have to leave so fast 
i barley got to know your name
I'll admit it makes me sad
how you bounce & wont explain
We could've had a blast
baby girl its such a shame

I would've showered you with gifts
& treated you like a queen
I loved it when we kissed
layin next to you was like a dream
I was gonna ice out your wrist
& make your neck & fingers bling
But i'm glad you chose to split
before i put you on my team

I know you didn't care 
cause you never showed appreciation
We could've made the perfect pair
but you just wanna keep me waitin
Well soon i won't be there 
cause i'm starting to get impatient
& it really isn't fair
you should've already been mine for the takin

So theres nothing left to do 
but keep my head up & move on
& get over feeling bue
but to continue to stay strong
All i ever wanted was you 
but you just wanna do me wrong
So heres my goodbye i'm through
see ya later girl so long

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/6/2012 6:01:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Date: 5/25/2012 3:36:00 PM
It's nice to hear this from the other sex for a change. Well done on a lovely write!
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Date: 5/25/2012 3:23:00 PM
Very well written this poem, Brandon - like it alot. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/25/2012 5:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brandon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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