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So It's Personal 080412

Only one time Will I allow this to happen I'm glad we wrote in pencil not pen You deserve to be with The one who you claimed I could be mean and Tell your deed,but I Truly would be violating The creed in which I Wrote "NEVER MAKE A FOOL OUT OF YOURSELF FOR ANYBODY, IF THEY WONT DO IT FOR YOU" Every night I hung on to your every word and I thought you were genuine I loved who you were when I thought I knew you

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Seosamh De Burca

Date: 4/16/2013 1:02:00 PM

Such a sense or hurt and anger in your poem. Reading this I feel it would work well as a spoken poem,(the way all poems should be I guess) if it was extended a little. However, some strong lines in...... loved who you were when I thought I knew you.........Will I allow this to happen I'm glad we wrote in pencil not pen. (excellent lines). Life is a school and we all learn from the setbacks it deals us. Thank you for sharing and I wish you well.