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So it seems

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So it seems

I feel like my prayers
Have not been answered
I feel like everything I do right
It's a challenge 
That comes with it

I feel like don't nobody
"Understands" what 
I'm really up against
I feel like better days
Will come eventually

I feel like their have to be
Someone who cares
Well now I feel like my GOD
Understands because he's the one 
Who's "There"

It's been multiple "days" 
I been hurt 
More like stabbed in the back
The more I have a chance to think
The less I have to react

Will you follow my lead 
Through all adversity 
Or would you hold me down
Like our 1st year anniversary
So it seems Right?

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