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It's not a duck...it's an ugly swan.

So I Can'T Call a Duck -- a Duck

SO I CAN’T CALL A DUCK…A DUCK
                     …..if someone’s PERCEPTION
				………..wishes  it a SWAN

I cannot write of HOWS and WHENS
			for fear of other’s NOWS AND THENS

Nor shine thin light
			in darkened space

of demons most
			will never face


The sunset now 
			forever marred
			
by global warming’s
			
			trumping card

All beauty lost

			to self esteem

of mirrors cracked

			demented dream

YET CAN I CALL A ROSE - A ROSE

			by any other name

walk the ROAD LESS TRAVELED

			into this COLD DARK NIGHT

stand alone as poet

			NOT AFRAID TO WRITE

John G. Lawless
7/27/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:42 AM
John, this form is like that of monoku though some of your lines can't stand alone with the others but some can stand alone too.....While scrolling at the list as this the time am commenting and catching you intrigue me of your title.. made me giggle lil bit!! but down reading all mmmmmn on how noisy a duck sounds so is the lines delivering solid messages!!!~OLive ELoisa
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