Notes About The Poem

so i am not alone

i close my eyes submerged
i cannot hear a word
and rising for a breath of air
warm moonlight strokes my hair



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Singh Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Title of the poem expresses a beautiful meaning of the poem Very nicely crafted poem
Gauthier Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 6:54 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Akham.
Mckeithan Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 6:54 PM
Wonderful imagery Line.
Gauthier Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 6:55 AM
Thank you very much, Oliver ~
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