So Hard

Struggle with the loneliness
gun in my hand
Thinking of the cold steel bullet
just laying there within

Picture your face
throughout the grim, dark day
If you could see me like this
I wonder what you'd say

Thinking back of the times 
and knowing you're the one who left
That's one thing to drive me nuts
one thing I can not forget

No one is around
I've looked hard and long
The streets in my heart are empty
cause everyone is gone

I could take it all away
to not take another breath
Falling so fast
without having a safety net

Feeling of the cold steel bullet
thought of you is the last I think
Into the fiery pits of hell
for eternity I shall sink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 6, 2016 at 12:04 PM
CAMERON CRICK, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. **skat**
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April 26, 2016 at 6:20 PM
cameron crick, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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May 25, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Wow Cameron......Great sadness you express, but hope that you write and keep writing because you have a gift that comes right from within your core........Shaz
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